Lines....(critique please)
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NichTT




Location: England UK
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Tokyo Monorail train approaching station.
I was struck by the convergence of the train, monorail, fences and buildings focussing towards a distant bright space.
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Waynebarker


Location: Phoenix AZ US
Posts: 53
Wed 09-January-2019 10:51

Nick, my comments per your request: I too am drawn by the leading lines, however, this photo lacks impact since, as you say, they draw your eyes to a "distant bright space" --basically your eyes are drawn to nothingness. Also the image lacks anything of interest in the foreground--the train is more of a distraction when I view it.