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rbeeson




Location: Clearwater FL US
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bjsprecher


Location: Prairie du Sac WI US
Posts: 4
Fri 03-April-2015 09:31 Rating: 7 

This would be a great shot if you didn't have the greengage on the top dropping down into the models face.
Topcat15


Location: El Cajon CA US
Posts: 15
Thu 10-September-2015 05:23 Rating: 8 

This is just a bit over-saturated and I don't mind the out of focus bush appearing at the top of the photo since it give the impression of the environment that she is in. I do think you should acquire a diffuser or shower cap for your flash. Because she is in the shade, with the sun at her back that the front light should mimic a softer more diffused light as if it is the natural ambient light. I hope that this constructive criticism helps you in making minor changes in your approach to lighting.
Topcat15


Location: El Cajon CA US
Posts: 15
Thu 10-September-2015 05:26

This is just a bit over-saturated. However, the approach to it is very good. There are some minor changes that I have recommended that I believe will help the artist in understanding light under different circumstances.