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f5titan
Location: HILO HI US
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Sat 21-November-2009 11:49
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Rating: 7
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On this one, the water in the background pulls my eyes. From where you stood, if you had tilted the lens down a bit to more fully include the four men at the bottom then they would catch my attention first and lead me upward to the people at the umbrellas. Including the boat crossed by the pole would show enough of the water to give the scene "place" (at riverside or seaside).
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f5titan
Location: HILO HI US
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Sat 21-November-2009 11:52
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I'm assuming that the activity at the umbrellas was you main subject.
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amit_datta
Location: Kolkata IN
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Sun 22-November-2009 11:46
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Yes the umbrellas were the main focus, but unfortunately there was no space behind me to stand.
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